Susan began her day like any other day school,
basketball, and home. Little did Susan know this would not be an ordinary day? When
Susan came home from basketball she took a shower and went to the kitchen to
find her some food for diner. Her mother was working a late shift at the
hospital and wouldn't be home until she was sleeping. While
Susan warmed up her food she heard a noise outside her door that sounded like
metal being rubbed against another piece of metal. What was that noise? Susan
thought. Curious Susan decided to go outside and look to see if anything was
there. Susan stepped outside and found nothing. Hmm that’s odd Susan thought.
That's when she heard the microwave going off inside and was reminded that her
food was ready.
Opening the door Susan went to go inwhen out
of nowhere she was grabbed from behind. The person had grabbed her arms
tightly and wouldn't let go Struggling with her attacker was useless for whoever
grabbed her was strong, but she couldn't give up for she feared her life was in
danger. Susan kicked, shoved, and swung at the air. Her attacker had managed to
get Susan's arms behind her back and tied. Susan knew it wouldn't be long until
the attacker had completely subdued her. Putting all her might she had managed
to kick her attacker in the stomach right where she was aiming for. She thought
she could buy enough time to run and try to get away from them and to safety. The
attacker crumbled to the floor crying out in pain. Susan took that moment to
sprint into the house and managed to close and lock the door with her hands
tied behind her back. She grabbed a knife from the kitchen counter and cut the
rope off her hands freeing them. Scared Susan went to go to the phone was when
she noticed someone coming through the back door. In her moments of terror she realized
she forgot to lock the back door.
Susan ran outside and went straight to the woods
that surrounded her house knowing she had no neighbors and the only place
around for miles was nothing but woods. Susan ran faster than she ever thought
possible crying and wheezing along the way. After running for quite some time
she realized her attacker wasn't pursuing her. She stopped running and felt an
eerie calm settle over the woods. That was when a male went shooting out of the
bushes lunging toward her and in his hand he carried a knife. She knew that if
she wanted to survive that she would have to kill him and resolve came upon
her. Her and her attacker began wrestling and she managed to pry the knife away
from him. Using all the force she could muster she took the knife and plunged
it into his heart. He dropped to the forest ground and soon he was dead. Susan
was scared and didn't know what to do so, she dug for an hour and put the man’s
body in the ground and covered him up with dirt.
The
End
Your story sounds like it could be real . It gives you the feeling that she's going to continuously keep getting attacked. I like how you set the mood and the setting.
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